DREAM

There's definitely a lot of eye candy here. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
The use of watercolor technique for the gradients is great.
I think there's too much for the eye to focus on. The flower in her hair is the most colorful, the paint splatters have the most contrast, and the eye is the first thing most people recognize in a picture. Try focusing on one object, and force the viewer to see what you want next. Tone down the stuff you want to fade into the background; that'll create interest and make the viewer have to stick around to get the whole picture.
Most artists have difficulty with symmetry of the face. That's why it's so tempting to hide one eye behind something, but you have to learn to resist the urge. It seems lazy, especially while one eye looks great, such as in your painting. It's really difficult to make one eye look as good as the other, but you can do it. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />

It seems like I'm totally ripping apart your painting, huh? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..." />