Sketch Tool: SAI Color Tool: SAI and Photoshop CS4 Time Taken: 1 week
Wow! I love the cat and girl, I very enjoy on it. Thank *Kenty1234 for commission me~ I have put a lot a lot a lot effort for all~ hope you like it I love it~XD
Thank you for take a look here~ All the fav add and comments are very welcome~
This is a very nice piece of work and the colours are magnificent. Bad= I thought that the back round could use a bit more I don't know, texture. What really bothered me was the shading on the Cats designs. I thought it could use a bit less darkness. Those were my thoughts but the rest is so beautiful.
Well the bad was over quickly. Now on the the good.
Good= Everything, The designs, toys. I especially love the hair, her outfit and the skirts ruffles. Not many people can do nice drawing of embroidery and this was the best I have ever seen. I loved the shading and how the cat on the book shelf is ever so dark that it looks natural.
This is definitely an amazing piece of work! You show that you most certainly have just as much talent digitally as you do traditionally.
You do an excellent job with coloring! Especially in the hair! Shading is excellent as well! I love the little details in this piece - it gives so much life to the picture! (Such as the buddha cat on the shelf, the hair piece, and the various cats and cat toys throughout the picture.
The only real thing that this piece comes up lacking in any way is the background. The background, visually speaking, comes across as rather flat and does not really fit with the style of the character (in the sense of how it is drawn.) Also, there is a lack of shadow beneath the girl on the bed. Granted the light source is not all that strong but it is directly above her so there should be some sort of difference in the shade of the bedding underneath her skirt.
I must re-iterate that I love your coloring! I will most definitely be using your photos as references (if that's alright) as far as coloring digitally. You do a superb job!
I must also mention that I have scored you lower in originality because lets face it, school girls are not an original theme, especially when underwear is involved.
This is a nice, fun piece. My issue is the same as the other critiques here, in that the background looks flat. I think it's mostly due to the bookcase being completely flat on to the picture plane. I think if you were to show its side in perspective, allowing us to see how far back it goes into the space, it would really help bring a sense of depth to the picture.
Bad= I thought that the back round could use a bit more I don't know, texture. What really bothered me was the shading on the Cats designs. I thought it could use a bit less darkness. Those were my thoughts but the rest is so beautiful.
Well the bad was over quickly. Now on the the good.
Good= Everything, The designs, toys. I especially love the hair, her outfit and the skirts ruffles. Not many people can do nice drawing of embroidery and this was the best I have ever seen. I loved the shading and how the cat on the book shelf is ever so dark that it looks natural.
A beautiful, beautiful piece of art.
You do an excellent job with coloring! Especially in the hair! Shading is excellent as well! I love the little details in this piece - it gives so much life to the picture! (Such as the buddha cat on the shelf, the hair piece, and the various cats and cat toys throughout the picture.
The only real thing that this piece comes up lacking in any way is the background. The background, visually speaking, comes across as rather flat and does not really fit with the style of the character (in the sense of how it is drawn.) Also, there is a lack of shadow beneath the girl on the bed. Granted the light source is not all that strong but it is directly above her so there should be some sort of difference in the shade of the bedding underneath her skirt.
I must re-iterate that I love your coloring! I will most definitely be using your photos as references (if that's alright) as far as coloring digitally. You do a superb job!
I must also mention that I have scored you lower in originality because lets face it, school girls are not an original theme, especially when underwear is involved.
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